Slowly Dying

Slowly Dying

A Poem by ANNA

I’m slowly dying

I feel my skin crawling off my bones

My heart stills silently itching to scream  

I’m being replaced because I haven’t found my soul-mate

That can track me down before its too late

I'm in a triangle shaped like a bubble

There is no way out but to keep on going around this circle of madness

I’m killing myself on the side line

When the sun goes down and I’m left to win this fight

My story will draw in only the shadow creatures

If you think you've been there done that in my shoes

Then I suggest you to walk inside my mind

A house without a home

A death without a funeral

A loneliness you can’t tell your friends

I’m slowly dying

All because I’m my worst enemy

© 2014 ANNA



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This is very Deep, Anna...how can one love someone else when at times we can't love ourselves...that somehow we need that validation, to feel whole...I use to feel the same way thinking there's something wrong with me because I couldn't meet everyone's expectation...and then realized, I am happy...it's not me, it's them lol...I didn't end up with a white picket fence but I keep trying. A beautiful write from the soul.

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"All because I'm my worst enemy"
True word. This is really deep. Poignant but a rich piece of writing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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This is very Deep, Anna...how can one love someone else when at times we can't love ourselves...that somehow we need that validation, to feel whole...I use to feel the same way thinking there's something wrong with me because I couldn't meet everyone's expectation...and then realized, I am happy...it's not me, it's them lol...I didn't end up with a white picket fence but I keep trying. A beautiful write from the soul.

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Drawn to the pure power of this. There is something about baring your soul, with not an atom of daylight between you and the world. And that last verse, it was like a sudden nightfall. An eclipse.

Honored, to have read this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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I truly love this piece, specially the ending you nailed it my friend...Bravo!

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ANNA
ANNA

Phoenix , AZ



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I am 28 and love to write. I have been writing for a long time but there is always room for more. I thank everyone that reads my poetry. You truly never know how good something could be until people s.. more..

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