Pain

Pain

A Poem by MaiaSki
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Pain in words, the description of the cycle of pain

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You say you can't see pain, you say it doesn't exist 

But you are not seeing, you are being an idealist 

Once you open your eyes, you will see it everywhere 

Hiding in the shadows, only coming out when we aren't there

 

Lurking in peoples hearts, building with each day 

Sitting on the street sides, waiting to make someone pay 

Pain is an emotion, it demands to be noticed 

Overwise it festers and spreads disease like locust

 

You cant escape pain, you cant run away

You have to make a stand, have your say

Though you cant defeat it, it won't be long 
Until the pain comes back, then you must stand strong

© 2017 MaiaSki



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MaiaSki
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Apprehensively Vivid

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 6 Days Ago


MaiaSki

6 Days Ago

Thank you so much Matthew! Your time and review is much appreciated
Matthew Kult

6 Days Ago

You are most welcome Mai

Always,

Matthew
wow this is so lyrical and beautiful and all so true it even feel and sound like a rap to me i was rapping it the whole time while reading good flow nice inner beat.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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MaiaSki

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much! That's lovely, and thank you for your feedback. I would love to hear someone rap .. read more
Very well written, and so very true. I love how you say, "then you must stand strong." It puts a positive touch to a sad topic. Very good work!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MaiaSki

1 Week Ago

Thank you! That feedback is lovely, and I really appreciate it. I'm glad someone else can see the be.. read more

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MaiaSki
MaiaSki

Australia



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I love to write poetry. My poems express the most beautiful part of my soul, and the monsters that lurk beneath. We all have scars, I turn mine into art. I hope your own scars, can relate with mine. more..

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