Mediocrity

Mediocrity

A Poem by JelliFyshKissUs
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I don’t gag much 
On the silence anymore

Or the bore 
That froths forth 

From the bind of my mind

To the stumbling blocks that curve up my spine

And settle at the tip of my neck


Coddle-stone heaps of debris as my sleep

Dangles and tangles 
In a dream that swings most slothfully

Lazily
Hazily-I steep

Defying the bleak

Breaking the border bland in my hand

To stand on the wind and eat solstice again

With my heart tied around my eyes


No surprise that the piles
Of dandelion clouds

Disperse into a sea of butterfly wings

Whose flutter-by stings me with letters in my throat

And I choke on words that chirp like birds
And sing like sentences

Pretenses of blue
In a sky of sad

But at least I don’t gag
On the silence anymore

Or the bore 
That froths forth

From the bind of my mind

To the stumbling blocks that curve up my spine

And settle at the tip of my neck

© 2011 JelliFyshKissUs


Author's Note

JelliFyshKissUs
Writer's block attempts to hinder your creativity in spiteful ways and makes the things that do surface quite mediocre. But it's better than nothing.

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I think this is an amazing piece of writing, Shawn. Filled with innovative imagery and a delicate touch on the pen/keyboard to bring the ideas to imaginative life.
And I choke on words that chirp like birds
And sing like sentences

Pretenses of blue
In a sky of sad

But at least I don’t gag
On the silence anymore.... Exceptional and inspirational.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like it, especially since, when I've had writer's block, I've been known to produce far worse. lol. Pretty good. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


You turn writer's block into a pyramid of Giza...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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turning the block into something exquisite..well that puts paid to that..because its inspired something truly divine..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you know why the caged bird sings ...



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a refreshing presentation of the emotional tempo of poetics taken and stirred through the personal trials and misfortunes of being~ the refinement of the structure is almost too beautiful to bear in all its humble sharp grace~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this is an amazing piece of writing, Shawn. Filled with innovative imagery and a delicate touch on the pen/keyboard to bring the ideas to imaginative life.
And I choke on words that chirp like birds
And sing like sentences

Pretenses of blue
In a sky of sad

But at least I don’t gag
On the silence anymore.... Exceptional and inspirational.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 5, 2011
Last Updated on October 5, 2011
Tags: Writer's block, Silence in my head, A tingle of a thought, Mediocre, Stumbling as I find my voice aga

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JelliFyshKissUs
JelliFyshKissUs

Nashville, TN



About
I don't know why my brain cramps up whenever I'm asked to tell others about me. Maybe I'm not that interesting. Maybe I'm being modest. Who knows? I'm a married mother of none who is devoted to .. more..

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