Dear Love

Dear love
I'm still waiting for that day
When I'll find my soul mate
I know it will be great 
Because I still have fate

Dear love
We can go on a cheap date
Die together and meet you at the golden gate
We can eat with no spoon or plate
We can cuddle together when it's late 

Dear love
I'm a love bait 
I'm tired of it and it's getting kind of late
I'm hoping for tomorrow to find my soul mate
If he don't show up tomorrow 
He better be worth the wait

Reviews

[Maiiaxiong]

Thank you for the feedback

[Chip]

Interesting, I like the structure of the poem.

I really like it, but just one - minor - criticism, you should put a comma at the end of each "Dear Love".

[Lydia]

Very good, and interesting.