False Love

First "rap" I ever wrote roughly six years ago.

I’m a lyrical disasta. I see right past ya.

I offered you love and friendship

And all I got in return was nothin’,

So stop frontin’.

 

I can see through all your lies,

Bullshit, and deceit, but when

He’s around he falls to his feet.

You’ve got him wrapped around

Your finger and he doesn’t see that

You’re the bringer…of sorrow.

 

This will continue tomorrow,

But in the mean time I will finish

This rhyme. You’re transparent.

That means I can see right through

You. I know what you are.

 

S**t, I’m flying so high I shoot for

The stars. I’ll be up there living life

How it’s supposed to be. You’re

Nothing but white trash to me.

I’m done with manipulative girls

Like you. I’ve got better things to do.

So peace out, b***h. Stop casting your

Spells like some wretched witch.

 

Reviews

[Emily]

The rhymes are there, but I can't feel the flow in the writing. It was a little awkward. Maybe if you performed it, it would flow better?

[Guardian Of The Lost]

Yeah. Typically that's how raps work. Hard to get the feeling when read.

[Emily]

True true true