Hidden

Hidden

A Poem by Ascending
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Show Yourself

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Endless Words 
Which lock your eyes
Plenty
Plenty of puns and idioms
I'm on another planet
Seems to be from a different world
Hidden
Foggy and somewhat unclear
Meaning
Endless, Exquisite, Enlightening
Unique
A painting of word
Bang
An explosion of mist
A storm of visions
A sea of emotions
As clear as day
Hidden
Raindrops of words
A sunset moment
Quickly gone
Or may last forever
A true experience
To have the words of poetry
Fall upon you
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© 2011 Ascending


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Poetry is completley the evidence of life and I love your line "A true experience
To have the words of poetry Fall upon you" I love how when you read poetry this is always a hidden meaning behind it and when you finally figure out what the message the person is trying to express its like "WHAM"


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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The artwork was amazing. I like the use of the language. Made your desire point using strong statements and powerful words.
"Hidden
Foggy and somewhat unclear
Meaning
Endless, Exquisite, Enlightening
Unique"
Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Poetry is completley the evidence of life and I love your line "A true experience
To have the words of poetry Fall upon you" I love how when you read poetry this is always a hidden meaning behind it and when you finally figure out what the message the person is trying to express its like "WHAM"


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 29, 2011
Last Updated on May 7, 2011

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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. ~Leonard Cohen more..

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