Realization

Realization

A Poem by Trish
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A turning point in a relationship

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You say you love me

You lie to keep your secrets

You are not my fault

© 2008 Trish


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Great Haiku. Beginning the lines everytime with - you - makes these lines the more powerful. In these few words you were able to produce the depth of the tragic that always lies in the realization and end of a relationship and(or feelings.

Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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