A Funny Story

A Funny Story

A Poem by Malvika
"

love.

"
It's funny cause i don't even remember why i fell for you
maybe it was because you made me feel so special 
the way you looked into my eyes,
the way your hands touched mine,
your little tricks to make me laugh.
we never had the long chats but
being with you was always so short and sweet
i thought we had something special
but it was me who was seeing things differently
cause when you hugged me i was 
awkward yet comfortable , happy and embarrassed
so many feelings rushed into that one touch ,even if just for a second 
but for you it was just a cold hug.
And that's what hurts the most.

© 2017 Malvika


Author's Note

Malvika
i wrote this poem in almost 5 minutes,so please be kind and
do share your opinion!

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I thought you are writing in a happy stance of Love but it came out blunt

no worries. I loved the twist and 5 minutes seems worth it.
Sorry for the delay in reviewing it.
I skipped reading & writing for a bit so!

Posted 2 Years Ago


In starting I was thinking may be you are talking about your loved one's. But twist in last line is fantastic, well written poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


You title it as ' A Funny Story' and end it with how it hurt you. To feel hurt and still see it with a good sense of humor is a wonderful attitude to have.
Well written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Malvika

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
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A very nice expression to the feeling of love and attachment. It's to be felt and it's to be loved. Love is something extraordinary that not many people are lucky enough to experience. Good writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Malvika

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Love can be pretentious and yes Funny. You can smile of the funny moments together and whispering(love) for passing by.

great piece, and i love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Malvika

6 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing your opinion!
It is funny how in little time word love could get into action and take over us.
Perfect piece Malishaka.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Malvika

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words
When its too much.. There's an outburst... It happens often when this creepy feeling called love intervenes with life... Loved the poem..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Malvika

6 Years Ago

Yes very true and thank you for sharing your opinion
Love is a two way thing. It is also a many splendoured thing....you don't have to sport a ring!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Malvika

6 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing your opinion
I was thinking at first. What a great guy.
Seems appearances can be deceptive.
Great write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Malvika

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Cold..... how it hurts when love don't return. I love this piece so much.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Malvika

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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Added on September 12, 2017
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