Can we meet again?

A strange feeling watching a stranger.

Saw you coming down the stairs,
A shiny face, bringing in light.
Sudden wind setting your hair free,
Making my entraped heart again feel.
Your gleaming green eyes set on me,
Enticing me to follow them.
Came towards me as i marked,
You sat next to me.
Time elapsed i had to move,
But i looked back smiling at you,
Asking a question in my heart,
Can we meet again?

Author's Note

Just a beginner. This is my very first attempt of writing a poem therefore i will need your reviews and a little encouragement to write more.

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I think that you have made a remarkable first impression on me. That question that you asked was with your heart to the heart of the other person? Am I correct on this? Is there a response that you have not put into print?
Please, continue to write. You have a fresh approach to our craft!

[Mamta Vashisht]

Aah! Yes the question was from heart to other person's heart and thank you very much sir. I will definitely write more.

[Rajat malik]

I think I have became a huge fan of yours.....
Firstly because, You write love stories and they are my favorite.
And second, I really can see everything going in front of my eyes when I look upon your poems......
So, frankly speaking you have left an amazing impression on me :)

[Mamta Vashisht]

Thank you Rajat for your kind words and giving your time reading my poems.

[Rajat malik]

You are welcome, anytime

[sapna sagar]

its a good n a fresh start.....congo..!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Mamta Vashisht]

Thank you sapna ji 😊

[Shivam Murari]

While I was reading this, the theme music of the song Enchanted by Taylor Swift, kept playing in my mind. This is so real and so true. Put in simple words, the emotions well expressed. I see the poise and potential. Welcome to the classiest club of writers/poets. I'm sure we can expect great works from you.

[Mamta Vashisht]

Thank you shivam murari. Well i have not heard song and i hope that i give better works every time.

[Shivam Murari]

You're welcome.