a bleak reality

a bleak reality

A Poem by MandaClarine
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a cocaine induced love

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Your body tall and skinny

Your eyes incandescent

You gaze at my naked body as if it were art

The moment is ethereal, infinite, unrestrained

Our bodies coalesced

Something beautiful is born

My ignorance passes

A thread of reality weaves in

You start sniffing

Your eyes are not incandescent, they are luminescent

Your gaze is not a gaze, it’s an evanescent daze  

Your desultory elision revealed

Your high is lost

But how can I leave?

Your high is my high

Your gaze is my trance

Tantalized by a glimpse of what is surreal

I want more  

© 2014 MandaClarine


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"Your high is my high
Your gaze is my trance
Tantalized by a glimpse of what is surreal
I want more "
The good description brought me in. I like the above lines. Some places can feel surreal. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MandaClarine

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)



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oh, wow . . . this is an amazing trip

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Your high is my high
Your gaze is my trance
Tantalized by a glimpse of what is surreal
I want more "
The good description brought me in. I like the above lines. Some places can feel surreal. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MandaClarine

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)

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Added on March 25, 2014
Last Updated on March 25, 2014
Tags: love, cocaine, surreal, reality, existence, sex, chemical love


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