Everyday

I dont know what it is but I am crazy for him! I cant stop thinking about him! I dont know what it is but I think I am in love.

Every day
I think of you
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Every hour
I long for you
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Every minute
I miss you
*****
but, Every second
I breath for you
*****
And its all because
I love you

Author's Note

OK, so right now this is how I feel and I needed to vent. I know its short and probably doesnt mean or say much, but I dont know. I am sorry if you do not like it. It is the shortest I have ever written, but I needed to write this out. I dont care about grammar and flow either. If you dont like this then dont rate. Opinions and advice are allowed! Thanks!

Reviews

[JenLyn]

This was cute, short and to the point and unlike most love poems because it showcases the positive side of love while most love poems are about heartbreak and longing for someone, this seems happy to me and that you're actually in love rather than lust but that's just my interpretation. Overall a nice write. Keep it up! :)

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Oh! this is adorable!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

sweet-^_^-

[Doreen]

Although this is short, it does show the emotions that are felt. I feel the chest tightening longing when I read this. It's very sweet. I like your use of bold vs regular script. Nice write.

[larryb]

Loved this...clever and sweet I use this format now and then and it worked great here :)

[Silere]

You have such a gift for writing. I have read many of yours. I know you think this is short.. and you say it doesn't mean or say much.. but it really does. Sometimes the best poems are short if the words are perfect. These are perfect! I wouldn't change anything at all. This is probably my favorite! You emphasize the right words as well! Keep writing this way!! and Thank you for sharing!

[LynLee]

ahhhhhhhhh.........i very much loved this!!! i like how the time kept getting smaller.........and the ending was perfect!!!!

[PaperHearts]

This is good! :) It's hard to write about such complex emotions in such a simple form, yet you've done it brilliantly here! This was really heartfelt and genuine, and I thought that it said so much more than some of your other, more lengthy poems did. Keep writing! :D
~PaperHearts

[Emily]

Nice piece -- short, emotion, and sweet.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was really cute. I loved it. Thanks for sharing. :)