Best Friends

We were best friends, but soon became lovers

I miss you
Because I can't see you

I love you
Because I can't have you

You were my best friend
But now....

You're the love of my life

Reviews

[Queen of Hearts]

Love this! This is how I feel at the moment. Anyway, really good!

[Daydreamer54]

Aww! short but sweet. i'm sure some pll were in this situation before we they had a friend that they were in love with, but they didn't want to risk their friendship, but now after hearing that their friend feels the same way about them, they are bf and gf. Awww! This was a really sweet poem! :)

[Scarlet Pulse]

Very nice short and emotional poem. It makes sense, and people can definitely relate to it. Good one.

[Victoria]

I think I totally understand. It's like you didn't know how you felt until they were gone. Kinda like that??? I liked this. It was short and simple and straight to the point and sometimes those are the best ways to express your feelings. Good job. You did an amazing write!

[Daniel Gardner]

Very Sweet, BFFS!!!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a good poem. I did love it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Chloe Christine]

I absolutly love this. (:
It's such an easy thing to understand! nice job!

[PaperHearts]

Aww, so cute! I loved the shortness and directness of this piece. I think that the situation that you described is one that a lot of people are going to be able to relate with, which is always a great thing as a writer. Good luck in your relationship. :D
~PaperHearts

[Tina Kline]

A best friend who becomes a love has a better change of lasting if both friends feel the same, otherwise it can be quite the dilemma.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow I can relate to this piece cause I too have a dear friend in where I’ve developed feelings for, but I know I could never go that way. Great write well done