Best Friends

We were best friends, but soon became lovers

I miss you
Because I can't see you

I love you
Because I can't have you

You were my best friend
But now....

You're the love of my life

Reviews

[Bear]

Well, expressed... to the point; covers much so, very succinctly! As if you "read my mind" and expressed past thoughts of my own.

[Poet's World]

when best friends turn into lovers its great, but don't lose the friendship, its best when your lover can be your best friend, companion, confidant, lover, and husband.... thats the best best gift ever... and i am proud to say gifted...

[Indigo Ribbon]

A well written poem, Congrats! Its great :-)

[Magic Soul✯]

beautifully written from the heart and soul. :)

[Doreen]

Aww short and sweet

[Craig Froman]

You share with us the complexity of friendship and love that often mingles in... how the relationship changes.. deepens and moves. So well done.

[not your typical girl]

I can relate to this a hundred percent.. unfortunately of course. . :P
a nice write. a lot said with such few words. keep it up Manda! :)

[James Watts]

I can relate. Going through something similar at this moment.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

i agree with all the other reviews on this poem.. well done .. short and to the point.

Chloe

[The Analog Kid]

Nice simplicity. Once that line is crossed for one or both of the parties involved...the friendship dies.