Stay

I've been pushed away,

I've been broken down,

He was always next to me

When I lost my faith,

When all my hope was gone,

He believed in me

One mistake,drove us away,

Two words,made us obey,

Three words,made us stay

I had to pick myself up,

And slow myself down,

I had to change,I had to grow

But In my heart I always know,

when my world crashes down,

when the stars burn out, 

He'll be there with me

Reviews

[Queen_of_Winter]

This is a very heart warming poem. You let your feelings run into it and, it means a lot, and I hope it means a lot to that person as well. This describes the way I feel about this certain someone, and I know he feels the same way to. You did a very good job with this poem. Keep up the good work, let your feelings run into your fingertips to inspire you.

[Antoñyo]

Excellent piece most teenage girls should cross paths with.
I applaud you for this,

Thanks for sharing

[Kelsey]

This is quite beautiful. It seems you're torn between the person staying in your life, and trying to hold on to them as they go.

[Soul Fire]

Very emotional, and heart warming. I really enjoyed it. Your feelings were well conveyed in this piece! Excellent work!

[Hanhil]

I love your style! :-) Simple and touching.

[Mandyy Reed]

Thank you so much,Hanhil.

[Hanhil]

I love your style! :-) Simple and touching.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Beautiful!! A wonderful description of the love that we all wish for!!! Wonderful write!

[Angelic Surrender]

This is wonderful :) it's great to have someone to always be ther for you