BORING CLASS

Here Iam in class sitting
Hard to keep my eyes open
He explains and I ain't getting
Not a word from his lesson
On and on he keeps talking
and I have no power to listen

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

lol...
you now reminding me my school days when i used to get irritate due to those stupid lectures. but today, too many gone years latter, i realizing, those lectures weren't just boring lectures, but also the time of childhood that never come twice in life if once it's gone. so either live it or curse it, it's our call. very realistic poetry.

very thankful to you for licking yourself down in such cumming words.

[Manel]

you are so right these times wont come back
thank you for reading my poem

[TheBrokenOnes166]

The poetry is indeed realistic, but lacks both grammar, and proper English.

[Manel]

thank you for taking the time to read it

[TheBrokenOnes166]

Not a problem. ˚ ҉✧ෆ ҉*₊( ‾ ʖ̫ ‾)₊* ҉ෆ✧ ҉˚

[Sami Khalil]

You have described it marvelously. Very humorous...Thank you for sharing...:).................

[Manel]

thanks sami always encouraging

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, lectures...the old "passive learning" trick that often doesn't work very well...it is really hard to listen...

j.

[Manel]

tu are absolutly right ,those lecture are a real torture
thanks for your time

[Shannon]

"no power to listen" is a great phrase. It actually speaks volumes.

[Manel]

thank you dear ,

[Shannon]

I feel like this line could maybe be a starting point for a piece about someone who is so blinded by something - hate, or this is how we have always done things sort of thinking, that they cannot hear another option!