tradition's chaine

tradition's chaine

A Poem by Manel

  • the garde stoped her at bookstore for a chat in the second floor with a friend about a college repport threating. your father i'll call loudly, she got scold in front of all world out, no way to go with shame eyes down makeing her feel like a w***e in community so insecure usising its chaine rule knoun as tradition's whole



© 2016 Manel



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ah... i guess, if a lady by herself long to be a w***e or want to pursue the POP -- Profession Of Prostitution, then it's her call. no other can object anything 'bout her, perhaps, as per "Tradition Chain", i guess, she's being treated like an "object" if you're certified being hoe. so yeah.. that's tradition.

i see many ladies. some want to be prostitute cos of money, but some want to be... it's just cause what they want. it's their passion, and high oozing appeal.. so i guess, us men should adore 'em as well rather wanting 'em just for removing the hunger of soul. quite an interesting write it is.

looking forward to reading your work!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

9 Months Ago

i appreciate you review thanks Adam



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Sad reality. Living in fear of so much of society.

If you want to look at wording and spelling, I'd be happy to help.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Manel

7 Months Ago

i love to thank you
Sometimes traditions are good, other times they stand for abuse and control. In this case, it is bad...Excellent sharing...:)................

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

9 Months Ago

thank you so much
Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

You are welcome. ...:::))))
ah... i guess, if a lady by herself long to be a w***e or want to pursue the POP -- Profession Of Prostitution, then it's her call. no other can object anything 'bout her, perhaps, as per "Tradition Chain", i guess, she's being treated like an "object" if you're certified being hoe. so yeah.. that's tradition.

i see many ladies. some want to be prostitute cos of money, but some want to be... it's just cause what they want. it's their passion, and high oozing appeal.. so i guess, us men should adore 'em as well rather wanting 'em just for removing the hunger of soul. quite an interesting write it is.

looking forward to reading your work!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

9 Months Ago

i appreciate you review thanks Adam
that would be a hell of a note,bringing her down in front of the world !

Posted 9 Months Ago


Manel

9 Months Ago

yes indeed
thank you wordman for passing by

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