Rupture

Written March 07, pre-deletion day, I think it was this one ............

Rupture

 

Tell me, is the heart really physical? What makes it beat so fast?

Is it built from our emotion? Is it strong enough to last?

How much can it hold? … How much can it take?

How long do I have before it starts to break?

I wish to walk amongst the rain of the coming spring,

I yearn to look upon the rose before my heart gives in.

Trapped in a cell of lies my heart will soon be ailing,

Underneath the blanket of the sky, the truth is I am failing.

 

 

Reviews

[Mark Pearce]

The heart.

Toying with the physical and emotional concepts of the heart...not sure which one is "right" for you. Questions and more questions.

Verse of a seeker.

[Dixie]

this is beautiful. truly

[Michael X]

Manoosh, this is written with intense clarity, and a subtle heart-
breaking effect that is touching, in regards to the aspect surrender,
combines a passionate overwhelming feeling of being in emotional
confinement, imprisoned by the affective aspect of consciousness
when influenced by desire, as the heart's yearning state of turmoil
comes to pinnacle point of need, to either break and move on, or
slip further and further into love possession, fragile work of heArt, take care, mike