Dew Drops

When the night falls in love with the moon.

Dew Drops

 

Over the fading evening spreads its wings slowly

She ushers on earth like a sensuous beauty

 

With velvety touch comes the deep dark night

Shining in its best attired like a shy bride

 

On a guided path with time her eternal keeper

She unfolds discreetly her fiery beauty dark and deeper

 

Amorously moving this dusky beauty filled with pride

The keeper counts her changing folds quietly by her side

 

Her eyes dreamy like a drunken goddess

Flirtatious stars competing for her intentness

 

Waves of passion flashing through her heart

Her flawless converse with time ticks the start

 

She stretches her arms to embrace moon the wanderer

He flashes his cape and changes her darkness into silver

 

But he never stops to drink from her wine so sweet

She bathes her dark beauty in this promising need

 

She enraptures boundaries of control embracing him

The keeper ends all counts holding back his whims

 

The Wanderer moves away towards the destination unknown

She gathers beads of broken moments losing sight of the known

 

The keeper dismisses her audience back to her retreat

She vanishes and leaves behind those moments scattered on her seat

 

The wanderer longingly watches her go aching to stop

Array of these velvety moments lovingly called dew drops

 

 

… By Manpreet Kaur Matharoo

© copyright Wed Dec 14 06:48:53 UTC 2011 - All Rights Reserved

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

"She stretches her arms to embrace moon the wanderer
He flashes his cape and changes her darkness into silver

But he never stops to drink from her wine so sweet
She bathes her dark beauty in this promising need"

Simply beautiful..xo :)

[Sahar moonlight]

Very beautiful poem.
The creativeness is so perfectly expressed in every line.
Thanks for sharing such a great poem :-)

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Somewhat Celtic in my opinion. I love poems like this!

[Asb]

very vivid and beautiful imagery.....
awesome write :)

[Cassie Fraga]

magical read!!! kept me wrapped from the start... love the word play a poetic touch of bliss... very nice write!!

[WindSong]

This is a very mystical and magical delight! Such a beautiful and poetic tale that kept me mesmerized to its conclusion. Very well composed!

WindSong

[Jack Isaac]

Having seen the moon during the day, it's clear that night's romance goes bad every now and then --and the Moon wishes to "see other people" But enough about me, this poem is cool. I'm not sure, but I'm seeing a thunderstorm in this relationship too --wonder if the author intended that. Nice write, and by cool I mean very smooth, capturing the essence of velvet and dew. Thanks.

[Emily B]

this is wonderful, I enjoyed it very much

[SUGATA M]

This is out of the world. Don't waste your talent in TB partnership. Be a serious creator. The talent and passion with you.

[Yoshiyuki]

Love the poem! It was very interesting!