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Dew Drops

Dew Drops

A Poem by Manpreet
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When the night falls in love with the moon.

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Dew Drops

 

Over the fading evening spreads its wings slowly

She ushers on earth like a sensuous beauty

 

With velvety touch comes the deep dark night

Shining in its best attired like a shy bride

 

On a guided path with time her eternal keeper

She unfolds discreetly her fiery beauty dark and deeper

 

Amorously moving this dusky beauty filled with pride

The keeper counts her changing folds quietly by her side

 

Her eyes dreamy like a drunken goddess

Flirtatious stars competing for her intentness

 

Waves of passion flashing through her heart

Her flawless converse with time ticks the start

 

She stretches her arms to embrace moon the wanderer

He flashes his cape and changes her darkness into silver

 

But he never stops to drink from her wine so sweet

She bathes her dark beauty in this promising need

 

She enraptures boundaries of control embracing him

The keeper ends all counts holding back his whims

 

The Wanderer moves away towards the destination unknown

She gathers beads of broken moments losing sight of the known

 

The keeper dismisses her audience back to her retreat

She vanishes and leaves behind those moments scattered on her seat

 

The wanderer longingly watches her go aching to stop

Array of these velvety moments lovingly called dew drops

 

 

… By Manpreet Kaur Matharoo


© copyright Wed Dec 14 06:48:53 UTC 2011 - All Rights Reserved

© 2011 Manpreet



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You really have the great imagery :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


such a sweet and beautiful creation!

Posted 6 Years Ago


its amazing how ppl can magnify small little things with the potence of words.....
sirji sahi hai!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Really lovely writing. I like whole wording. Keep it up!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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well expressed ideas ,beautiful poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its adorable I find those from India use different wording than i would but the context is just as beautiful

Posted 6 Years Ago


A very beautiful poem. Wonderful imagery. Enjoyable to read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow!!!! You have portrayed the beauty of nature signifying Dew drops beautifully. Dew drops stay for very short time, but they beautify the nature immensely. You have added some deep meaning to that also.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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New Delhi, India



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