The Journey from Me to Her

The Journey from Me to Her

A Poem by Manpreet
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A beautiful thought on beautiful moments of life

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A Journey from Me to Her

 I stopped to gaze

Through the glass window

Detached from numbers

Under profit and loss on my screen show

 

Starting a backward journey

In my mind through unnoticed past

A face gleamed before my eyes

Playing with pebbles as seen last

 

The look was fresh as morning dew

Encircled by a starry dream

Sparkling giggles pure as a prayer

Softly crossing life’s realm

 

Auburn pigtails with silk ribbons

Daring wind to blow it away

 Sun enhanced pink of her cheeks

Watched the magic in her play

 

A serene sight, too pure to touch

Delicately melting folds of skies

Unheard in shadows I tried to find

Clear answers to silent whys

 

Conclusions settled a fiery spark

To be back in time with heavy heart

Thirst began to drink its peace

Silence loud and sounds were bleak

 

 Stretched arms couldn’t console the tears

Life is choked with plastic cheers

It was a journey started from me to her

As she wondered in her heart if I would ever get there

 

 *********By Manpreet Kaur Matharoo

 


© 2011 Manpreet



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The impossible journey is time travel yet we will take that journey in our mind and on-line. The oracle of old is seen today in crystal clarity of a liquid crystal display. So you have shared this journey of you to her by way of this computer display, and as I read it, I take the journey too. So, my friend, only the best writer can take me on an impossible journey, nice work, well written sentiment.

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The impossible journey is time travel yet we will take that journey in our mind and on-line. The oracle of old is seen today in crystal clarity of a liquid crystal display. So you have shared this journey of you to her by way of this computer display, and as I read it, I take the journey too. So, my friend, only the best writer can take me on an impossible journey, nice work, well written sentiment.

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the child's heart calls us back in times of sadness. beautiful.

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Very heartfelt

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So Beautiful! I felt this in my heart, as I read your whimsical flow of words. Thank you for sharing. :)

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I loved how you ended this sweet cute poem. Description was vivid, word play was brilliant and the flow of thoughts was smooth. Liked it. Great write. :)

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very vivid and complete..

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