Golden Leaf

My first attempt at Haiku

 

A golden leaf drifts

Down down on the autumn breeze

A moment of joy

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

An amazing picture of Autumn. Love the use of colour here and congratulate you on your first attempt at this style of writing.

A drifting leaf in autumn can be a beautiful sight.

Well Done

Jen

[Imperfection]

A pretty good first attempt, I must say.
Excellent use of color, as well.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a wonderful Senyru, supebly done and very beautiful. I can visualize the leaf drifting to the ground.

[Carole]

And a very beautiful first try. I love the way you used the different font colors representing the ravishing colors of fall. Nothing like a leaf from a maple tree drifting to the ground. There is just something about that time of year that is so picture perfect! Great job, my friend!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Autumn in poetry has often been associated with a feeling of melancholy. Your first Haiku attempt, certainly encapsulates the season and emphasises our reflections, at this time of year.

Excellent piece!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

[emz]

I smiled when i read this..... Autumn is my very favourite time.... this is the epitome of autumn... for your first haiku!! i,m impressed


love it

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