The Evolution of Love

The Evolution of Love

A Poem by Amanda Naomi
"

a dark and passionate love

"
back
    in the days
when my love flaked
          and fell from my lips
              it was insincere

now
   at your thought
i can drink in
         and my desire for love
            it can be soothed

soon
   at the last hour
when my love dies
           and returns bitterly cold
                  it will be rage

© 2011 Amanda Naomi


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Amanda Naomi
mkay? what do you think?

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I think it's mkay :)
But sad. Must love die?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting interpretation of the dynamics of love - or, I guess maybe, the thin line between love and hate? I think it is fascinating to delve into the evolution of love into anger. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this, it's so sad and beautiful. You did amazingly though (: great job!
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 13, 2011
Last Updated on June 14, 2011
Tags: love, poem, death, emotion, emotional, hope, loss, pain, passion

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Amanda Naomi
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I am from the wildest imagination From a selfless child with nothing to hide Im from a broken family filled with love And too, from a family broken with lack of love I am from the tip of a pen F.. more..

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