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just a really old piece of mine

By the way of isolating fears
We came
In our relationship.
We hide our dirty secrets,
Trying to save
Love, hope, and all this other romantic s***s.
With stupid smile and closed eyes
we found this point -
It's time for truth,
So I looked at you and tried to find
In this monster
Man, to whom I told my usual "I love you" -
You saw same in me, didn't you? -
Secrets and mystery...
Love, which was built on a fake, sand castle,
Destroyed by only one wave, one try.
Strangers completely -
After all this years I couldn't find a word.
Trying to say "still love you",
But, again and again, wrong.
Well, I don't hate you, neither,
Know nothing about you.
Try to pretend didn't hear you,
Live like before - NO.
Under each smile - lying,
Each answer from you - wrong.
Maby, better just say "see ya"
And walk away from this wall
Of our understanding.

Reviews

[Silvario]

a very nice piece. well written with smooth fast paced tempo and flow.

well done indeed :)