River of Tears

River of Tears

A Poem by Becky
"

Dreams will float away if you let them.

"
A river of tears
Carries the dust of dead dreams 
But fish fight the flow.

© 2013 Becky


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"carries the dust of dead dreams" amazing

Posted 11 Years Ago


...I think this is my new favorite poem

I love the meaning :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the idea of this, and how each line introduces a new element, it does make it a bit dream-like actually. It's really nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Great haiku. I love the meaning of this. You are already writing better haikus than I do.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nicely stated. A good Haiku.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is really cool, I like the concept brought across in brevity. "Never give up." Wonderful work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great haiku!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


short but meaningful ...good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Actually I think this might be one of the best haikus I've read in a long while, i love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 23, 2012
Last Updated on April 7, 2013


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