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Phone Call

Phone Call

A Poem by Mari Baptiste
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Gone are the days when love was an acceptable reason to be with someone... It's all about status now...

"
Breathe in
Now, breathe out

"You'll be okay," 


My tears roll, and I continue to weep


I can hardly breathe


Breathe in
Breathe out
"Everything will be okay."


I hear his crying
On the other end of the line

I feel his tears
As if they are mine

We've fought hard for our love
But we've run out of time
He doesn't deserve this
Neither do I

I just can't understand
Why they couldn't see
That I loved him dearly
And that he loved me


How could they do this?
Do they even have hearts?
How heartless one must be
To pull two people apart!


Two people who loved each other
More than life itself
All because of an obsession
With looks!
Status!
Wealth!


Was our love not enough
For them to see?
To look past their fixation
On affluence and prestige?

We reminisce times we shared
For a few hours more
Times we laughed and smiled 
Before we knew the score


I promise to wait
And so does he
That this wasn't good bye,
We both agree


The time has come
To put down the call
As much as we'd want to
We couldn't further stall

I can't believe 
This is our last phone call


Breathe in
Breathe out 
Come on, deep breaths now

You'll be alright

"We'll meet again soon"



© 2017 Mari Baptiste



Author's Note

Mari Baptiste
The dialogues in bold print are basically self pep talks.

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Hi, Mari,
It's just Richard dropping-in to check you out.
Nice piece, with a believable storyline, good flow, a rather smooth rhythm, nice rhymes, slant rhymes, and an easy presentation to follow.
Your emotional element hits deep, as does the relatability in unfortunate circumstance that would deprive two passionate lovers of their chance at true happiness.
Rivals Tristan & Isolde and Romeo & Juliet.

Beautifully done, M'Dear … never give-up hope where love is true.
My warmest hugs to You! ⁓ Richard 🌺

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Mari Baptiste

1 Month Ago

Thanks, Richard 🙂

I'll be sure to send you a message or a read request whenever. .. read more
Richard

1 Month Ago

Please do, Mari ; )



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Hi, Mari,
It's just Richard dropping-in to check you out.
Nice piece, with a believable storyline, good flow, a rather smooth rhythm, nice rhymes, slant rhymes, and an easy presentation to follow.
Your emotional element hits deep, as does the relatability in unfortunate circumstance that would deprive two passionate lovers of their chance at true happiness.
Rivals Tristan & Isolde and Romeo & Juliet.

Beautifully done, M'Dear … never give-up hope where love is true.
My warmest hugs to You! ⁓ Richard 🌺

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Mari Baptiste

1 Month Ago

Thanks, Richard 🙂

I'll be sure to send you a message or a read request whenever. .. read more
Richard

1 Month Ago

Please do, Mari ; )
Sad Romeo and Juliette as they are forced to part by families that do not understand their love or accept it. Beautifully described with very effective thought- speech style. Lovely form, flow, rhyme. Beautifully poignant. I hope they meet again

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mari Baptiste

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Annette. :)

I hope so too... :(
I can relate to your experience of love rejected. Your poem conveys the pain of breaking up, especially due to an outside factor. In my own experience, I just try to remember the good times and avoid staying bitter all the time.

I'm a staunch believer that everything happens for a reason. Though we can't exactly see it, there is light at the end of the tunnel.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mari Baptiste

1 Month Ago

The most painful part is when neither of you want to cut things off, but then you have no other choi.. read more

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Added on August 22, 2017
Last Updated on August 29, 2017
Tags: Love, Pain, forced separation, poetry

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Mari Baptiste
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I discovered my passion for writing a little bit later compared to other writers my age. Most of them start at around 13 or 14. I only started at 17. My teachers told me that I had a knack for writing.. more..

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