Even from the blackest rose...

Even from the blackest rose...

A Poem by Maria Retz

Even from the blackest rose, white petals shall fall,

when it understands the meaning of forgiveness.

Even from the coldest ice, warm waves will shine,

when it understands the meaning of unconditional love.

The darkest forest is able to give birth to the brightest tree,

if it is allowed to grow through the experience of its true self.

 

© 2010 Maria Retz


© 2010 Maria Retz



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Maria Retz
Please let me know if you find errors in the text, I am trying to learn English as fluently as possible. Thank you

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nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE"

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Rei
Wow this was so amazing. I didn't see any mistake. I loved the connection between nature and the human emotions.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I quite enjoyed this. Though short and lacking rhyme, it flowed well and carries with it a meaningful message. I did not find any errors, and I never would have guessed English isn't your native language.
Good Write.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on February 13, 2010
Last Updated on February 13, 2010
Tags: rose, darkness, forest, spirituality, spiritual

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Maria Retz
Maria Retz

Denmark



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I only share those poems and stories I have written that aren't good enough for publication. Therefore, do not think that these poems and stories are the best I can do, I can do much better ;D I have.. more..

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