Treasonist

Treasonist

A Poem by Marilyn My Bitterness

O envious sinner
So proud, so strong
I beg an answer
What went wrong?

You knew of me well
Yet rejected my ways
And expected blessings
All and the same

I only wanted to help
Be kind and show love
Compassion and mercy
As taught from God above

I forgive you in truth
Yet still feel the sting
I will think twice
Before help I bring

And this makes me sad
Because all I want is to give
But once you cut the Tree
It can no longer live

© 2009 Marilyn My Bitterness


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i saw you got honorable mention for his poem in a contest. woot! who's this about?

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was quite sad, betrayed by a friend you thought was once true. So relatable, and true.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Truly bitter. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i can only help but wonder who you have once again offered your help to willingly only to be rejected. please don't give up on me. I have my proud moments at times but I will always come back later to apologize. dont stop growing as a person. your fruits will eventually become manifest to all.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on May 22, 2009

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