A Curiosity

A Curiosity

A Poem by Mark

I would rather not be looked upon at all
then with those circus eyes
as one looks at a curiosity
I suppose I will die
a curiosity
I hope they don't find the body

© 2011 Mark



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It's fascinating.
Love the line "circus eyes"
Well written and Thought provoking piece.
Im not sure how I want to die.
So many choices, yaknow?


Posted 8 Months Ago


It doesn't matter if a corpse is found

In the end, if someone cares enough to search, I guess we lived well enough.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I don't know. So few people care about people around them. Beside family. Few notice death anymore. The poem told a interesting tale. I want to die a quiet death myself. Just be gone one day and remembered for the laughter I create while I roamed this world. A very good ending to the short poem.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


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