Growth?

Growth?

A Poem by Mark

There's nothing like f*****g
when you're young and in love
and then things get fixed
that weren't broken

© 2011 Mark



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Haha so true! your poems seems to be like satire, something I once knew dimly but never quite got my head around...oops.

Posted 10 Months Ago


ahh, been there, done that. Nice and short and to the point, I like it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Well. The life of young well written. Pleasure in life is nothing but enjoying. OK. my best regards.

Posted 1 Year Ago


this is a sly string of words my friend. I very much like the tow opposing stanzas. F*****g and fixing, two concepts at different ends of the same canoe. well doneand viva la

Posted 1 Year Ago


This was short but again you got your point across and it came out great.

Posted 1 Year Ago


short, sweet, and to the point. i like it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


For some reason I really like this. It reminds me of how things used to be before s**t was fucked in my life. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


things get fixed and become boring. the confusion and turmoil of youth makes f*****g that much more enjoyable.

That's why Picasso always kept 3-4 women on call even in his 60s - to add some turmoil and excitement to the Bedroom.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Short and sweet. I can dig it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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