Leave Yesteday

Memories cannot be separated

in the mind and human heart

like flesh and in its soul

and the words that are untold

the morning has risen

the sun's beauty has been revealed

routine in everyday be twisted

when legacy is laid on the way

better is to sing a happy song alone

than to live the day with yesterday

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

when legacy is out of the way
to sing a song of HAPPY BIRTHDAY
is no longer sang on the start of the day

I wanted to know more about the Happy Birthday line. I feel like this poem would be stronger with no rhyme or complete rhyme. Also, the word "Oblivion" in the title, along with the mention of "legacy" and "happy birthday" in the poem makes this one a little hard to understand. Thanks for sharing :)

[MARK my Word]

Thank you for the review :-)
There is a mystery in the Happy Birthday line that makes the poetic persona react that way.