The Break Up

"I tried to love you,bless it i tried." He said.......

It seems you think you can live this way but you can't.......without me

One day you will see your big mistake.sucks how you chose this way

When you said it was over you had my heart running away crying,

can't you see my heart running so far.

You watched me go while i thought what went wrong.

If every thing could be every thing but every thing is over.

Every thing could've ended good if you just told me what went wrong.

I guess love is just a silly word that hates me and tells how i lost you.

When you left me i was feeling low because my wonderful love

just fell apart

I saw you pass down the street

and as we passed 

we said nothing and went

are separate ways.

So honey,

Replay that sad day and think of your mistakes.

Author's Note

Just another weird dream.It felt like a music video dreaming this.
Sorry if it really doesn't sound like a poem.

Reviews

[Basu Gupta]

preferable piece in a preferred time..sometimes sad ending too realises the actual value of our lovely partners..i enjoyed the piece and i really be very happy if you can extend it more..coz, i love reading it..

[melissa]

it had a nice flow to it i thought good work:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I got the feel this one was not as you said in your Author's note...a poem...but a bit more of a rant and venting mixed together to make a interesting read of sort...but I do feel the title does fit the scene...of this write...