Beginning

My breath, shallow,
 thoughts, wind.
My eyes, hooded,
beneath your gaze.

Hands rendering explanation,
words can not yet form.

Reviews

[Richard Layne]

There is something very sexy here and subtle. i like it. great title that adds to the action

[Sometimes Blood]

very well-penned. keep writing my friend

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Your words wind around a reader and fill them with emotion. You have a knack for expressing

[Wandering Minstrel]

Your writing has a special flair my friend. Keep it up!

[Mary Bosworth]

I feel your emotion here, and understand where you are coming from. Great concept and good piece

[Blake Fodor]

Very refreshing.... quite in keeping with the topic.

[Anne Timmins]

This is a very good write indeed

[John Anderson]

This is very unique and full of raw emotion. Great job!

[Lauriegirl]

This is an amazing write. You have penned your emotions and sadness so perfectly