slow circles

fingertips trace
            slow circles on his temples
           i gaze down
          barely whisper-
                      
                   "god...     i love your mouth"

he pauses
       searches my hooded eyes
                  
                  
     "i meant it...     you know?
          
            - i'd move   heaven and earth for you"
  

my back arches involuntarily
                  
                        " you already are..."

Reviews

[Donna Marie Gray]

Sweet, gentle devotion. Simply put and so honest. I love it. This is very moving.

[Jeremy Baker]

Very gentle, not a hint of salaciousness. The very essence of imagination lends a sensual touch of eros. Beautifully written.

[Blake Fodor]

This is just awesome, I love how you wrote this

[J.P. Bristow]

You painted a great picture here.........Pablo Neruda would have liked this one.

[David Scott]

Soft and seductive.
The poetry has a relaxed pace and you give the reader plenty of space to stretch out and simmer in the attention of you words.
A delightful read.

[A. Amos]

Compelling, passionate and enjoyable read. Well done!

[Tate Morgan]

Well now if that's not love it is something like it .

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You’ve got a fascinating premise here, and even more fascinating implications, impressive.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

These plot lines capture this well:

"god... i love your mouth"
"i meant it... you know?
" you already are..."

you develop simplicity and yet the verse give much... to the reader...