Future Tense Dream

Future Tense Dream

His words flow

Future tense

Speaking out visions

From loved filled lenses

Into the night sky

Of his lovely lady

by his side...

Moon dance 

upon her face

With shadows

of palm trees like grace

Her heart one with mine

Yet hers one like gold refined

Doves flying by 

Upon the night sky

Catch his words of truth

and love 

To carry them to

The maker above

He breathe out more

Of the one he adores

Golden are her locks

And the heavens keep

her on stock.

Soon to be released

And soon my heart will

rest in peace

Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

Beautiful imagery and dream-like quality- I love how you intermingle the image of the girl with your own desires and presence in "her heart one like mine yet hers one like gold refined". The images of the moon dance and palm trees are transporting. I can feel you witnessing their encounter and settling into the coming peace. Lovely poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts and journey in the poetry.
"Moon dance
upon her face
With shadows
of palm trees like grace
Her heart one with mine
Yet hers one like gold refined"
I wanted to know more. The poem create vision of joy and sadness. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Coyote Poetry!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Chris Micha]

You display a very touching element of love in this piece. Bravo!

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Christian!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh isn't that just the most precious poem, such sweet sentiment… this hopeless romantic is sighing and smiling.

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Rock and Roll Cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure Ms Bee