Pain is like a whip
A Poem by
Mary Bosworth
Eyes don't fade impressions hiding , maybe. Left to the wind over and under wonders never cease to amaze the Heart the Mind No matter what inflammatory as I am ... still I leave imprints on your Heart... Hurt is the biggest part Pain is like a whip every-time I get strong I slip, like a knot. It can suffocate or invigorate Let me be... your knot come see how easily I can tie you into ...me~! Come on and ...see.
© 2014 Mary Bosworth
Reviews
Such a well written piece Has great meaning.
Posted 8 Years Ago
love the flow of it, its racing style, great work Mary.
Posted 9 Years Ago
love the flow of it, its racing style, great work Mary.
Beautifully written...
pain is the most terrible thing to experience....
It's short but i really loved reading it....
Posted 9 Years Ago
Beautifully written...
pain is the most terrible thing to experience....
It's short but i really loved reading it....
wonders never
cease to amaze
the Heart
Well penned, great footage on real world, impressed
Posted 9 Years Ago
wonders never
cease to amaze
the Heart
Well penned, great footage on real world, impressed
Brilliantly written dear, with such a wonderful premise.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Brilliantly written dear, with such a wonderful premise.
This is heartfelt, and I appreciate that about you.
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is heartfelt, and I appreciate that about you.
This piece really got to me, I must say. I found this to be completely enthralling. Very good job my friend!
Posted 9 Years Ago
This piece really got to me, I must say. I found this to be completely enthralling. Very good job my friend!
The title says it all with your poem.
Creative views and connections to your subject.
Posted 9 Years Ago
The title says it all with your poem.
Creative views and connections to your subject.
You write so beautifully and I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Posted 9 Years Ago
You write so beautifully and I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
This poem is very good and creative, I love your style of writing. pain is like a whip, and love does tie two people together. I really enjoyed the poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
This poem is very good and creative, I love your style of writing. pain is like a whip, and love does tie two people together. I really enjoyed the poem.
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