Too soon

Too soon

A Poem by Matilda 3000

I sit in the propeller plane
Thinking of you
I feel so close to you now
Above the clouds

Could it be my childish image of heaven or the feeling of my mortality so close in this turbulence

When will you send me a rainbow, I silently wonder
My heart hopes you can find me
You're so small, only five.
Who is showing you the way now?

I turn my head and see the multitude of colours outside the window,
Descending from a cloud.
You heard me sweet Angel
And now i know you are safe

My heart breaks once more

© 2017 Matilda 3000


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Compartment 114
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Matilda 3000
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Gee
Man that is sad, beautifully so.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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BBP
very powerful and sweet.

I can relate to this feeling.

Posted 6 Years Ago


My softest condolences...



Posted 6 Years Ago


Matilda 3000

6 Years Ago

Thank you. The words don't feel like they are enough. But with loss I suppose they never will be. T.. read more
Chris

6 Years Ago

you are welcome... take care now...
You enjoy making your readers think... And I love it... A very sad imagery you've just painted... your ending is quite a start of moving on... and hopefully it's the last heart breaks...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Matilda 3000

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review:)
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Wow. My heart just broke. Beautifully written to evoke emotion. I love it

Posted 6 Years Ago


Matilda 3000

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review

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Matilda 3000
Matilda 3000

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