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First off, I am not so good with the POV of stories and such, I just write what comes to mind. If something is confusing please message me about it and I will try my best to smooth it out. Second, I am posting this on multiple sites to get maximum feedback so you may see this elsewhere or see a radical change for no reason simply, because of a suggestion that I like. Lastly, I am doing this because I want to and that is the only reason.
P.S. Messages about grammar and usage are appreciated, rather than comments on the like. If I delete a comment it is because I believe comments are for critique (pos/neg) not corrections, so please don't be offended.