My love is a whisper

My love is a whisper

A Poem by Matthew Ian Herrawood W
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I dont really care that it doesnt rhyme. Amy I love you... as always that is a whisper compared to the truth.

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My love is a whisper

Of what I really feel

My love is a whisper

Of what I really say

My love is a whisper

When I hold you with one arm

My love is a whisper

When I hold you with two

My love is a whisper

When I kiss you on your head

My love is a whisper

When I kiss you on your lips

My love is a whisper

That the whole world hears

My love is a whisper

© 2011 Matthew Ian Herrawood W


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Dear Matthew,

Yes, I know. Quiet, yet so deep and sincere. It is not quiet for any reason other than it is private. It is not quiet because it is ashamed. Just ask. You'll not hold back, but give full report of your love. It is a whisper, yet behind it is the power of a roar. Your love is a whisper of what you truly feel.

I understand.

Wonderful poem.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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1) Poems NEVER have to rhyme. People often think of poetry as having to rhyme, but that just means that they haven't explored all of the possibilities that this form of writing has. Not that anyone does- but they have explored very little.
2) I thought this was very good... sweet and touching in few words.
3) I thought that the repetition was a bit distracting. Not overly so, but it drew back from the poem for me.

Overall, nice job. c:

Posted 13 Years Ago


thats such a sweet poem. its so romantic!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome poem. wow I just love it! nicely put together

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply beautiful! The end.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how it repeats! It's an amzing poem, and flows perfectly!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was soo cute :)
I don't see anything wrong with it, it flowed well and I enjoyed. Excellent. Keep writing :) I think I read a story next!
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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love the repetition of this poem. it gives the poem a sense of absolute love. a great piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one of your most briliant works beautiful i love it more each time i read it i still can hardly believe you wrote this for me

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dude this is a great poem. From so much feeling and creativity. This is pretty good.

-Will

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this, it's brilliant it all fits perfectly together :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 18, 2009
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Matthew Ian Herrawood W
Matthew Ian Herrawood W

A Town, South Australia, Australia



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