FORBIDDEN

FORBIDDEN

A Poem by Maumil Mehraj

"FORBIDDEN"

In the day she breathes, 
the world around her seems real.
The ocean, she grants life 
to beings - great or small.
But at night, a profound sadness engulfs her,
for she sees the forbidden love of her life.
Her damp arms long to touch him,
but the moon is miles away!
He looks at her in awe,
the dazzling light they cast together.
But silently knows, 
that it will be long before they meet.
The ocean promises not to cry.
But when she does, her tears cloud the sky,
and cast a veil that separates her from him.
But they do know that the universe favors those who love.
So they wait, wait patiently,
for the day they will unite!


© 2015 Maumil Mehraj



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Maumil Mehraj
Hope you like it :)

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Gentle and powerful journey in the poetry.
"So they wait, wait patiently,
for the day they will unite!"
I liked the above lines. Left reader with vision and hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

Many thanks for reading
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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Omg as always... Excellent poem. You have such a way with words. c:

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch Marcel :)
Gentle and powerful journey in the poetry.
"So they wait, wait patiently,
for the day they will unite!"
I liked the above lines. Left reader with vision and hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

Many thanks for reading
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.
A beautiful story, full of hope and faith. Loved every line :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

many thanks Ana!
This poem is excellent. The imagery is wonderful, and it is rich with mythology, taking the reader to a place beyond the cerebral, and into the heart.

~peace, Todd

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

What a lovely review Todd..."to a place beyond the cerebral, and into the heart." mind if I steal it.. read more
modtoddinc

3 Years Ago

You cannot steal what is given freely my friend. :) Peace.
A beautiful piece of longing... oh how the ocean is drawn by the moon's presence and bathed in it's light... such beautiful imagery... well-done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

Many thanks for your kind review!
I just wanted to cry I felt in tune with the words its lovely.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

Sorry for making to want to cry, but I am glad you liked it :)
Thanks very much
Oh my god
I love this poem
This is how i feel

I love it

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

Many thanks :) I am very happy that you like it
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alf
Beautiful!! just beautiful. Soft, tender, and emotional . . . all with gentle subtlety that grabs at the heart. Wonderful write!!! alf

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

Thanks very much Alf for your lovely review :) I appreciate
Love the idea ... Wondering whats behind the curtain of this write up ...

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Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

Thanks...You know some days back I was so intrigued by the moon always being there, like every singl.. read more
such beautiful and your poetry has a maturity about it and you have a keen grasp of sertain thing

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Maumil Mehraj

3 Years Ago

Its very nice to hear that there is maturity in my work, even though i am like 17! thanks very much.. read more

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srinagar, kashmir, India



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