perfectly imperfect

"Perfectly imperfect"

She is perfect - perfectly imperfect.
She has flaws she can't hide.
She doesn't have the prettiest of smiles,
but she has a real one!
She is not the brainiest person around,
but she wraps her tasks with the best of her ability.
She doesn't have the most sparkling eyes,
but in them she has dreams.
So she doesn't run away from her imperfections.
She valiantly demonstrates her imperfections with utmost perfection!

Author's Note

You don't need to be a perfectionist, I promise!

Reviews

[R Smith]

great work Maumil, perfection is not to be found in this world but we create our own false perfection and call it perfect, you demonstrate here that to be considered this 'perfect' is unnecessary as we make the most of who and what we are which is enough for anyone, throw aside falsity is your message and you say it in brilliant verse, thank you :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

I think the world really needs to stop revolving around perfection and focus on other qualities. Thanks Richard for the lovely review!

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

What a perfect poem, Maumil! ;) This is so inspiring for all those striving desperately for perfection. You chose a great topic to write about and did absolute justice to it. Really, really well done! :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

Many thanks

[Reina Love]

Beautifully written I love it

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thank very much, Reina

[AaronFreitas]

You said it absolutely right my friend. I enjoyed this write very much... I always enjoy your creativity :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

i an very glad you enjoyed it :)

[B]

That is real beauty
to be oneself

Maumil i love the reality in this poem
And i love how simply it is what it is

You place across to your audience a message of beauty in words and form

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thanks Nisreenaa for your gracious review! :) be blessed

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A beautiful write that makes me smile. I admire those who never pretend to be something they are not; those who carry themselves as they are, and not what others say they should be. Your subject is real: she has a real smile; she does things to the best of her ability; she looks with honest dreams in her eyes; and she respects who she is. I'm in love with this woman and have never met her... well-done!!!

[Maumil Mehraj]

Well you really do seem to be in love...! Too bad she is hard to find in today's world
Thanks for reading and appreciating!

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I agree, Maumil... you are welcome

[Maumil Mehraj]

Well, too bad for you :(

[Aaqib Javaid]

And she writes well... enjoyed the poem..! I feel like that some one was narrating me a lullaby... keep writing.. god bless u.. :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

I never imagined her to be me...! good interpretation! :) thanks so much for the lovely review

[sapna sagar]

well done.....u write so well.....or sachchi bhi....bahot khoob .ye bilkul bhi zaruri n ki hme perfect hi hona hai......hmm imperfect hokr b purey to hain.

[Maumil Mehraj]

Bilkul sahi....Padhne ke liye shukria :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

and that is the way to go...........!!!
beautiful poem........beautiful message......
imperfections must be cherished!!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thanks Pushkar for the lovely review :) Much appreciated

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are very welcome!!! :) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. You told the truth with class and true words. Our imperfection make us different and special. If we were all the same. Would be a boring world. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thanks for reading...very glad you liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.