I'm not a Girl Next Door...

just wrote it because I feel I am different than others... n want to achieve more in all spheres of life...

I want to fly high up in the sky,

and want to suceed in whatever I try,

I want to delve deep into the depth of oceans

And take up adventurous expeditions.

I want to be at the top of Mt. Everest;

Enjoy breathtaking views of nature at its best;

Because I am not a girl next door;

Yes I am much... much more.

I wanna wipe out all the misery

Enrich all lives with loads of positivity

I want to taste the elixir of life

Be a part of that world where there's no strife

Let there be love alone, let all evil vanish

I just want all the violence to diminish!

I don't wish everything to happen perfectly,

But at least we can do our jobs sincerely!

Why there's intolerance? Why's there enmity?

Ignore 'en', replace with 'A' let it be Amity!

I ain't one amongst the self-centered herd,

I am different and as carefree as a bird; 

Someday from above I'll see the blue pearl shimmering

I'll get my answer that goodness is winning...

Then again I'll sing with all my heart and soul

That I was not a girl next door

Yes I was much... much more!

© 2017 harman kour

Author's Note

these were my honest words now I need to know yours...

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clemon73

Great flow a description. Great piece, keep it up. Great flow a description. Great piece, keep it up. Rating /100

Tate Morgan

The sentiment is fine I think I would give it more structure A rhyme scheme .Personally I like to distill things to their nexus so they are short and sweet Very good Tate The sentiment is fine I think I would give it more structure A rhyme scheme .Personally I like to distill things to their nexus so they are short and sweet Very good Tate Rating /100

Rasha

It is really good and flows very nicely! Thx for sharing x :P It is really good and flows very nicely! Thx for sharing x :P Rating /100

Fallacy Pharmacy

I really like the content of the poem... Very inspiring, absolutely breathtaking! I love how you repeated "Because I am not a girl next door; Yes I am much... much more!!!"... Great writing! I really like the content of the poem... Very inspiring, absolutely breathtaking! I love how you repeated "Because I am not a girl next door; Yes I am much... much more!!!"... Great writing! Rating /100

LostinKristina

These are amazingly spoken. I have re-read this already. and I am sure I am going to keep reading it. very very good write. These are amazingly spoken. I have re-read this already. and I am sure I am going to keep reading it. very very good write. Rating /100

Dev

And believe me.. You're not !! :) You're one such person who can set her heart at something and make the sea part just to get it !! :) Vry good write And believe me.. You're not !! :) You're one such person who can set her heart at something and make the sea part just to get it !! :) Vry good write Rating /100

Kelley

This was amazing . I really like what you had to say. I feel that way too. If we could get along in the world we could work as one instead of always fighting. Great work I loved it and making it rhyme made it even better. Thanks for sharing. Kelley Enzo This was amazing . I really like what you had to say. I feel that way too. If we could get along in the world we could work as one instead of always fighting. Great work I loved it and making it rhyme made it even better. Thanks for sharing. Kelley Enzo Rating /100

Simple_mee

Seems like a song to me.....has a certain flow n melody attaced with it. All in all a good read. "Coz I am not a girl next door"... ;) Seems like a song to me.....has a certain flow n melody attaced with it. All in all a good read. "Coz I am not a girl next door"... ;) Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

Poem is amazing. The poem described a girl with great dreams and hope. A girl that understand all things don't fall perfect. I like this poem. This would be a special young woman. Compete poem is very good. A perfect ending to a strong and positive poem. Thank you. Coyote Poem is amazing. The poem described a girl with great dreams and hope. A girl that understand all things don't fall perfect. I like this poem. This would be a special young woman. Compete poem is very good. A perfect ending to a strong and positive poem. Thank you. Coyote Rating /100 0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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[clemon73]

Great flow a description. Great piece, keep it up.

[Tate Morgan]

The sentiment is fine I think I would give it more structure A rhyme scheme .Personally I like to distill things to their nexus so they are short and sweet
Very good
Tate

[Rasha]

It is really good and flows very nicely!
Thx for sharing x
:P

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I really like the content of the poem... Very inspiring, absolutely breathtaking! I love how you repeated "Because I am not a girl next door;
Yes I am much... much more!!!"... Great writing!

[LostinKristina]

These are amazingly spoken.
I have re-read this already.
and I am sure I am going to keep reading it.

very very good write.

[Dev]

And believe me.. You're not !! :) You're one such person who can set her heart at something and make the sea part just to get it !! :) Vry good write

[Kelley]

This was amazing . I really like what you had to say. I feel that way too.
If we could get along in the world we could work as one instead of always fighting.

Great work I loved it and making it rhyme made it even better.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley Enzo

[Simple_mee]

Seems like a song to me.....has a certain flow n melody attaced with it. All in all a good read.
"Coz I am not a girl next door"... ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is amazing. The poem described a girl with great dreams and hope. A girl that understand all things don't fall perfect. I like this poem. This would be a special young woman. Compete poem is very good. A perfect ending to a strong and positive poem. Thank you.
Coyote