Tree of Life

Tree Hugs

Love is not the Word, what can describe the Bond between me and Thee,

Those Bonds are made in Heaven, Who is to Judge, You be you, let be Me,

I'm leaving you here, only to catch you later, Yes Darlin' you can now Flee,

For Am the Tree that Shed leaves every Day, I Rise Anew, Born to be Free.

Reviews

[NANCY DON]

This has got to be imspired! This is amazing poetry my friend. I love it so very much. Oh my god! Yes my god it is about god and the one we love.

[Mavericks]

Thanks don.

[Tannu Prajapati]

I really love his piece. Beautiful. :))

[Mavericks]

Thanks Tanu Sen.

[Tannu Prajapati]

sorry but it's prajapati.

[Mavericks]

Sorry Lol.

[Amrita]

Beautiful composition. I really like the idea behind your composition :)
Keep writing :)

[Mavericks]

Thanks Amrita, you are so kind. *winks*

[Avia]

This is really nice. I like the entire feel of it, and I think the painting is beautiful.

[Mavericks]

Thank you, Avia. Glad you liked it. This is my last Poetry, i guess. The Poet in me is no more. RIP. May be one day i will write a Book, who knows. But, for now. Good bye, Writers Cafe. =)

[Avia]

That's really sad. I hope it comes back to life. :(

[Mavericks]

Hey, don't be sad! You know life. WE should always do what we Love. And, i am going to so something which i wanted to do all my Life. And, don't worry, i will always find time to review your stuff. May be i am a critic from now on if not a poet. Lol. *hugs*

[Avia]

I'm happy for you. Not everybody gets to do the things they really want to. I hope it works out well for you. All the best :)

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I like the symbolism of the tree in this one....

Shedding its leaves and being born anew with each passing seasonal cycle. Death and regeneration. Much like the cycle of love in a lifetime.

Nice work.

[Mavericks]

You get the essence of it Doodley. Yes, Transformation! Sometimes we have to burn ourselves in our own flames, to go deeper and realize our True self - Soul. It's not easy but worth it!

[Priyanshi]

Wow..so beautiful words...and it looks like shayri, of four lines...really well written

[Mavericks]

Thanks for your kind review! Shayari? Really?

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure...
hahahaa....but to me it looks so,don't mind it.

[Mavericks]

I never mind. But, now you have talked about Shayari,i am gonna right one. Stay tuned! Lol.

[Priyanshi]

you must and I'll be waiting to read your shayri.

[Mavericks]

Okie dokie.

[Mavericks]

Sorry, Priyanshi. I think i can never by a Shayar. I am just too straightforward. Lol.

[Priyanshi]

oh, but did you try writing any?

[Priyanshi]

and don't be sorry, friend....keep smiling

[Mavericks]

Well, i tried. And, i think it sounds too lame. Haha. I will give you a link to one good shayari though.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cHc0_80IxOo

[Najam Us Saher]

Melodious and very refreshing to read. Beautifully written.

[Mavericks]

Thank you, buddy!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Ghania]

"Love is not the Word, what can describe the Bond between me and Thee,
Those Bonds are made in Heaven, Who is to Judge, You be you, let be Me"

Really loved it. Good Job. :p

[Mavericks]

It's a Fictional Poem. This lover never existed. Thanks anyway!

[Ghania]

You're Welcome.

[horizon]

Wow that is a gorgeous poetry..i loved the line..."those bonds are made in heaven,who is to judge" very nice...short but deep

[Mavericks]

Thanks. Glad you liked it! =)