No commotion

No commotion

A Poem by Maxwell Ryder

When I was young,
I needed noise and motion;
Now that I'm old,
I need quiet and devotion.
F*ck all this commotion!

© 2017 Maxwell Ryder


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it did not take long for me to agree
Fuk all this commotion!

pushing all that aside ... ain't age grand?

my 2nd read is always from the last page of one's offerings
the title drew me in ...
i have no words again other than thanks for your write!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Yes I have same.I became very shy and introvert. When I was young my life style was like Anthony Rimbaud . Now I am more like a Zen monk. You again write very well message is clear like snow outside of my window.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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