Just the dopamine

Just the dopamine

A Poem by Maxwell Ryder
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Written November 5, 2014

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I got excited: I projected, I channeled, I pretended I'd won. 
I felt like the kid I used to be, dreaming on the sofa, asleep; 
If only for a second inside this dream did creep, 
A former self of me. Or maybe it was just the dopamine.

© 2018 Maxwell Ryder


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hmm fun with bio-chemical napping eh!? just curious if you had written this with different line breaks? have to smile at the acerbic attitude on winning :)))))) ... being married to a wonderful woman who never looses ... i can relate ...... arrrrrrrrrrrrgh! ;)
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

i am putting that in the back of me noodle Max ... have not tried that technique in a poem yet :)
Maxwell Ryder

5 Years Ago

I think it’s more than a noodle, Einstein, and more like a dumpling 🥟 jk, thanks lol 😆
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

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