Hey, you there?

very touchy poem for me..

He ponders alone

yet he has no thoughts

no emotions to cut

still-he cuts through the pain

isn't he unfeeling?

no, he just needs closure

he wants to be loved

but he never opens his eyes

See that this girl loves you

you remain inferior, to my demise

yes, you are right

you're not worth living

because if you are alive

then why are you so cold?

Reviews

[Red Crown]

I liked it... many people only make these metaphorical and heavly elaborated poems/stories. I like these writings too but I think that honest words are simply the best ones.