Northern Skies

Older even... Needs work

Maybe you will see my hearts glow there
i lost it somehow somewhere
light from where Gods beauty shown
never forced, or weak was it seen
no jump or burst ever fake or fraud
no smiles are ever so true
as the ones born of believers,
in fresh hope childlike it is,
the demeanor and heart of Gods own people
Stars they are to see,
Beautiful and somehow far away,
yet so much ever here,
Where did this go? this eminating glow?
once my heart held it so dear,
but ever in the wake
of the dreadful worlds quake
thorns grew up,
the glow fell shallow,
i saw it run across the ground,
but being a plant, my roots are held fast
Where did the light go?
in the evening, that evening i saw in the quake, a Northern awesome glow
Perhaps back home? My lost glory flown?
no matter how i try it will not come,
so now today, i give up this way,
But see it not go,
So i throw my hands aside,
Let God be my guide!
im lost! Even when found! What a surprise!
I guess its what they meant when they said
A candle aught be shown, that light will not have flown,
So I render to my guide, Every ounce of pride,
He gently tells my soul, "rekindle, make her whole..."

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Thats a lovely poem, well written weel thought out and executed