Goodbye Laguna Canyon

Goodbye Laguna Canyon

A Poem by Maya

hills somber shadow
wind chuckles through creeping grass
wilderness heart weeps 

© 2016 Maya


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Another great piece! This one imparts a sense of mystery and longing with the words you used to personify the different elements of the haiku. I particularly enjoy the second line - it makes me think of the sounds of wind as laughter weaving its way through tall blades of grass. Great job on this haiku!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maya

3 Years Ago

Thank you. I wrote this a few days before my year long excursion in England. I had forgotten how muc.. read more
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Seems like you're gonna master at haiku!!
All the secret and mysterious longing described in just that short...amazing!☺

Posted 11 Months Ago


I like how you use the language. You give enough to open up the imagination and places of mystery. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Length does not matter....in poetry either! It is the quality of the piece; short or long, though a WIDE phrase might help in the final analysis!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Another great piece! This one imparts a sense of mystery and longing with the words you used to personify the different elements of the haiku. I particularly enjoy the second line - it makes me think of the sounds of wind as laughter weaving its way through tall blades of grass. Great job on this haiku!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maya

3 Years Ago

Thank you. I wrote this a few days before my year long excursion in England. I had forgotten how muc.. read more
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Well, you have me now. Two excellent works. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Well done, perfect form, count, the flow of Haiku. The short verse is one of my favorites and you do it very well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maya

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind assessment. I tend to only write short poems, maybe one day I will branch ou.. read more
Willard Wells

3 Years Ago

I have gone backwards and have been writing shorter verse. I find it helps me with longer pieces by .. read more

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