Lethal Dosage

just playing with the alphabets

Lost within

Somber rage,

Day  bloomed and died.

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

Somber Rage. I see the intention. First off, I love the poems that speak so much with few words. And I see the seriousness. Really well written.

[Mayank]

Thank you so much, glad you liked it.

[Cindy Marietta]

So few words, yet such a large meaning like others have said. I loved it

[Mayank]

Thank you Amanda!

[Tristie Frost]

Short but yet it's full of emotion. Great piece of writing.

[Mayank]

Thank you for reviewing!

[Norah]

Short yet profound, great write!!

[Mayank]

thank you Norah!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

So few words, yet so many colorful images they create.

[Mayank]

yeah, LSD does that.

[Frozen Eyes]

8 words worth more than 8 mill expressions.. Kuddos!

[Mayank]

Thank you! that was one powerful review.

[Frozen Eyes]

Welcome :)

[Ishita Dixit]

How do you do this?
Wizardry much?
Nicely done!

[Mayank]

When you are in wizard of the light, rage and everything is just an illusion... this is what happens! thank you :)

[Sindu]

Different stuff, different directions, different results and different days.. I go through what you say and all this minus the stuff part. Short n sweet just like the dosage.

[Mayank]

We all go through same day but very few of us, ease this with lethal dosage!

[Roshan Nair]

Great imagery of implosion and fission in a star towards death came to me as I read these words man. Nice work! :)

[Mayank]

Thank you for the review Roshan!

[ANTO]

This write is slightly 'acid-ic' Mayank but doesnt taste bitter at all mate!! ;p

(sings.. "Lucy in the Sky...with Diamonds...")
:D

[Mayank]

You got it right mate! thank you for the review
*joins for the chorus*