The Sum of my Brim

The Sum of my Brim

A Poem by McEltic

~
When clouds roll by
Disappear
in a blink
Leaving starlight
to compete for a nook in my cranny

I find
that the sum of my brim
grows brighter each night
But
I persistently
reflect
from my fanny
~

© 2018 McEltic


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Interesting way to suggest that you go around mooning your night skies! *wink! wink!* Nicely fresh, playful, & image-provoking . . . love the singular rhyme which punctuates your meaning. Great offering to brighten anyone's way of thinking (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


McEltic

3 Years Ago

I have to careful with the mooning around here because this time of year, my wife will be chasing me.. read more
A great poem to start my day, loved your wit a fun read.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on March 16, 2018
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McEltic
McEltic

London, Canada



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