The rise

The rise

A Poem by Mr.e

Releasing the past and embracing the future...


It was the sunset,

the darkness followed her eye,

as mountains swallowed.


Rivers in-between,

tears of heartache spill through cracks,

she drowns with spirit.


Remains highlighted,

revelations were exposed;

it was time for change.


Ancient eye emerged,

 distant starlight overhead,

the dream she once wished.


Passions reignite,

she rediscovered herself,

and slept on a dream.


It was the sunrise,

shadows retreat from her eye,

a new day begins…


Rubbing her eyes into the sunlight, the excitement of building her dream lifted spirits, and she could smile again…



© 2017 Mr.e

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so awesome ending words pal.......really hooks you and ends on such a impacting memorable choice of words...nice dude real nice mate.

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 Months Ago

Thanks for reading Lily, I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Thank you for your kind words Nolo, I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Posted 7 Months Ago

This is quite good! A literal joy to read--and loved the line' ...slept on a dream'. Wow...!

Posted 7 Months Ago

Thank you for reading Annette!

Posted 7 Months Ago

Lovely image and words. She dreams of Sunset and sunrise- darkness and light- despair and hope. Eloquent wordage and vivid imagery-"Ancient eye emerged"- 'Here comes the sun...."

Posted 7 Months Ago

Wow! Thanks Norah! You won't have to buy it though, friends read free of charge...

Posted 7 Months Ago

You made me clearly see the picture. I think you're so creative and if you have a book I would buy it :)

Posted 7 Months Ago

Thank you Dawn, I'm flattered...Sorry about the eye thing, it was intentional. Thanks again!

Posted 7 Months Ago

Well whatever inspired this it was indeed creative. I lol tend to cringe at the use of eye rather than eyes perhaps because I like seeing pairs ..but it didn't matter at all because the imagery was beautiful. A tribute to your skill as a writer me thinks;)

Posted 7 Months Ago

I'm not sure where the inspiration came for this, I assume from some of the writing I've been reading lately...

Posted 7 Months Ago

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Added on July 2, 2017
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