The rise

The rise

A Poem by Anthony (aka Mr.e)
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Releasing the past and embracing the future...

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It was the sunset,

the darkness followed her eye,

as mountains swallowed.

 

Rivers in-between,

tears of heartache spill through cracks,

she drowns with spirit.

 

Remains highlighted,

revelations were exposed;

it was time for change.

 

Ancient eye emerged,

 distant starlight overhead,

the dream she once wished.

 

Passions reignite,

she rediscovered herself,

and slept on a dream.

 

It was the sunrise,

shadows retreat from her eye,

a new day begins…

 

Rubbing her eyes into the sunlight, the excitement of building her dream lifted spirits, and she could smile again…

 

 



© 2017 Anthony (aka Mr.e)



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so awesome ending words pal.......really hooks you and ends on such a impacting memorable choice of words...nice dude real nice mate.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Anthony (aka Mr.e)

7 Months Ago

Thanks for reading Lily, I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Thank you for your kind words Nolo, I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Posted 11 Months Ago


This is quite good! A literal joy to read--and loved the line' ...slept on a dream'. Wow...!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Thank you for reading Annette!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Lovely image and words. She dreams of Sunset and sunrise- darkness and light- despair and hope. Eloquent wordage and vivid imagery-"Ancient eye emerged"- 'Here comes the sun...."

Posted 11 Months Ago


Wow! Thanks Norah! You won't have to buy it though, friends read free of charge...

Posted 11 Months Ago


You made me clearly see the picture. I think you're so creative and if you have a book I would buy it :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Thank you Dawn, I'm flattered...Sorry about the eye thing, it was intentional. Thanks again!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Well whatever inspired this it was indeed creative. I lol tend to cringe at the use of eye rather than eyes perhaps because I like seeing pairs ..but it didn't matter at all because the imagery was beautiful. A tribute to your skill as a writer me thinks;)

Posted 11 Months Ago


I'm not sure where the inspiration came for this, I assume from some of the writing I've been reading lately...

Posted 11 Months Ago



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Anthony (aka Mr.e)
Anthony (aka Mr.e)

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